In the holidays I went to Sylvia Park with my Mum and Dad. We went to Sylvia Park because it was my brother’s birthday. His name is Michael. He turned 18 years old. I got my brother a birthday present. I got him a watch because he likes watches. My brother was happy with his watch. He smiled at me and said thank you.
Next we had lunch and then we went for a bus ride. The bus ride was fun. After that I played in the Sylvia Park playground. It was fun too. Later my uncle picked us up and we went home. I had a terrific day.
Next we had lunch and then we went for a bus ride. The bus ride was fun. After that I played in the Sylvia Park playground. It was fun too. Later my uncle picked us up and we went home. I had a terrific day.
Hi Brielle,
ReplyDeleteI can tell you had a terrific day on your brother's Birthday! What I like about your writing was when you used the word 'terrific'. I like the way you use interesting words in the beginning of your sentences. I'm hoping to see you on Friday!