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Wednesday 22 October 2014

Trip to Chipmunks



During the holidays my family and I went to Chipmunks. My brother turned eighteen.

I was jumping on the bouncing castle. I felt like a bouncing ball. I had a ride on the train. The train went fast. I was not scared.


I really had a great time.

2 comments:

  1. Wow Brielle! You must have had fun in your brother's birthday! It sounds exciting that I want to go to Chipmunks! How high did you jump on the bouncy castle and how fast was the train?

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  2. Talofa Lava Brielle,
    I like the way that you have described the train. I have also been to chipmunks as well. I like the way that you have used a simile to describe how you felt. When did you go to Chipmunks?

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