Grandma and grandpas by Brielle

Learning Intention:W.A.L.T-Write a recount.

Success Criteria:I know I can do this when I write
my story in order and use  full stops correctly.

On Saturday my Grandparents and I went to K'mart  in Botany. They bought me a dress and a toy dinosaur for my brother. Then we had lunch. I ask my Grandpa if can we go to the park after lunch.When we got to the  park I went to ride on the swing.Grandpa pushed it high.After playing we went home. At home I greeted my mum and dad and told them I had a fun day with grandma and grandpa. 

Prayer- by Brielle

Learning Intention:W.A.L.T-write a simple prayer.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write a simple prayer to talk to God.
                                

Dear God please make the builders build Room 6 by term two so we can move in there. God please help me to listen to my teacher.Help my Auntie who died to go to heaven. Amen.